After feedback from the excellent Storywonk Revision Class, I’ve re-worked my main plot. I needed to beef up the conflict between my protagonist and antagonist and to make everything a bit harder for my main character. I also had to make sure that my antagonist was taking actions that made sense for her, rather than doing stuff because I wanted/needed that stuff to happen. Sigh.
I think I’m almost there. Should be ready to print out and do a final edit next week . Eep.
In the meantime, take a look at this spiffy The End bookend.
It costs £18.95 from Bouf.
[Via Happiness Is]